Friday, 10 December 2010

writing to argue

Lovely Year 8's

You need to continue to work on your written piece. It is very important that you use A F O R E S T techniques to improve the quality of your argument. I have given you all a writing frame to use and this is for guidelines - you can alter this if you wish. Most importantly, use the research you have done for your presentations on certification and censorship. There are 2 very strong arguments for / against 16 year olds and censorship - use facts / opinions to balance the argument and come to a clear conclusion.

REMEMBER - you will be assessed on the DETAIL of your work and the ACCURACY - spelling, punctuation, paragraphs ARE IMPORTANT - you have to DRAFT your work for both detail and accuracy. Make it count - use your time wisely and do your best. The written work will be kept on your file and you have all worked hard with research and I want your written work to reflect the FANTASTIC presentations that you did - considered, mature and persuasive.
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9 comments:

  1. Anonymous12 December 2010 at 23:50

    I watched "take me out" and it didnt have a rating for it , but there was no swearing involed, no rude scence , so i think i would give "take me out" a PG.

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  2. Mrs Mallalieu-Needle15 December 2010 at 02:59

    sounds like a fair assessment. Was the film any good?

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  3. Anonymous8 January 2011 at 06:09

    i have been reading captin underpants it is funny and about a headteacher that turns into captain underpants

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  4. Anonymous9 January 2011 at 02:35

    I have been reading alot of football magazines such as 'Match of the day', shoot. they are good because you are reading and learning about football.

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  5. cameron9 January 2011 at 02:54

    i have been reading oxford programmes there telling you whats hapening in the future and the present about the football club

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  6. Anonymous9 January 2011 at 03:39

    I've been reading girls in tears by jaquline Wilson. It's good but the books over quickly

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  7. Anonymous9 January 2011 at 12:18

    i have been reading a book about hair+makeup, and its a good book as it gives me lost of fantasic tips.

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  8. Anonymous9 January 2011 at 13:33

    I have been reading the pursuit of Liberty Belle by Amber Deckers. It is very good and I am nearly finished.

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  9. Mrs Mallalieu-Needle13 January 2011 at 02:50

    I am delighted to see the range of books that are being read. Keep this up and use this site to recommend books / reading matter - improve your skills in all subjects by reading more.

    Welcome back to school my lovely Year 8 class.

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